Broken Chapter 1: Pet Republished and Edited

Story by jizzerman3 on SoFurry

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#1 of Broken

Broken tiger finds a Master to help him put the pieces of his life back together.


Finally ,with a lot of critiquing and tons of advice from the community here, I am finally able to republish this story and feel proud of it. i got it edited by a nice honest "Gnollish Storm Paladin in Mimic-hide armor", his words not mine. He helped me a lot with my paragraphing and fixed a lot of typos. for me. I loved every minute of writing this story, and I hope others will love it to. That being said I would still love to hear any and all comments and/or questions. Enjoy reading!!! and watch if you like this because there will be more in store.

I lied in a cramped cage without any light, I hated life in there. "Hahaha" I laughed hysterically, not caring that I'd be whipped to the last inch of my life as punishment for being loud. I died a long time ago, just not buried in the grave yet.

I glanced over myself and winced, my appearance that had earned me the name "Cutie" is long gone, my fur was matted with caked blood. There are scars all over my body from repeated whippings. The cage master calls them my new "Stripes" thinks it's funny because I'm a tiger. What's left of my tail wiggles with a mind of it's own, most of it's been ripped of as punishment for an escape attempt years ago.

That is not the worst of it as I stare at my bruised and bloated balls. The bastards left a tight rubber band on my cock. Just so I couldn't cum on any of the patrons that came to fuck my worn out ass daily. I haven't truly came in over two years, "With that five inch thing he won't need to cum" they said.

The rusty door on the other side of the is kicked open by a familiar boot that's kicked my face repeatedly over the years. It is your friendly neighborhood slaver "Petey", a fat ugly mutt with black fur, his face looked like it had been beaten in with a tire iron when he was younger. Whoever did it didn't do a very good job in my personal opinion, should have killed the twisted bastard.

"Who's making all that noise" he said through a mouthful of tobacco, my loyal fellow prisoners all pointed at me while keeping their heads down. The mutt ambled over, opened my cage,and threw me up against the wall. "Should have know it was you" he said, spitting his wad of tobacco in my face like I was nothing. Something snapped inside me like a twig, I felt a rush of anger flooding into me like a river, I might be dead but I'm still Elvis Teach.

I did something I haven't done in a long while, I punched him right in the face, It didn't do much because I haven't been feed in four days, leaving me weak with hunger. Petey punched me so hard my nose bled and I saw stars as I fall to the ground. He repeatedly kicked me, and with every kick he takes away more of my will, but what he doesn't know is that with each kick he's teaching me. He drilled a hard fact into me that day: I am alive and that was the problem, A nothing like me shouldn't be alive.

"You slut! You know the boss hates it when I kill the product, but you went too far Cutie" he said, grabbing his pistol and aiming it. "Shoot then" I groaned, waiting to die, finally forfeiting hope. My will had left me... I am nothing, " I hope you enjoyed your last words" he said, placing the gun right in my face. I closed my eyes and count my final heartbeats, feeling the first "Baboom" then the second "Baboom" and finally the third "Baboom"

"Ba-" my heart skipped a beat as I heard a gunshot, feeling something wet hit my face. "Wet?" I thought. I open my eyes and notice that I'm covered in blood and it's not mine. I saw that Petey was dead and a short policeman stood over me. The cop kneeled down and said "It's okay, no one is going to hurt anymore". I was in shock, just when I given up hope, the one thing that I prayed for happened, I was free and it seemed to good to be true and it was....

I saw another guard was creeping behind the cop, while aiming his gun at the cop's head. I don't know why, but with my last once of will I covered the cop with my body. My shoulder explodes in pain as to gunshots rang out, my body slumping over the cop as I fell into unconsciousness.

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Slowly my I start regain consciousness after a deep slumber with my head feeling like it's in a sea of softness. My first thought when I wake up is "Please don't let that have been a dream", It took a full ten minutes to even open my eyes, because of that fear, When I finally did, the joy I felt was so powerful that it brought tears to my eyes.

I'm in a nice soft bed with pillows propping my head up, and the room around me is as deep brown with a lot of ornaments and trophies are on the wall. I looked at myself, noticing my fur has been washed and my tail had a bandage wrapped around it, my shoulder throbbed in pain but the IV in my arm was helping keep it stable. I scanned the room, seeing a short male mouse asleep on the couch next to my bed, he was dressed in a black shirt that says "I don't have tits so why are you looking down here" across the chest. He also had blue jeans with black and white shoes, his fur is a deep white along with his big ears that were laid back behind his head.

"Hello" I said trying to wake the sleeping mouse. As his eyes fly open I am startled a little bit, but when i started into his blue eyes it felt like i was sinking into a warn ocean, this instantly calmed me down. "Hello" He said while sitting up, his voice is soothing like jazz music, this helps to calm me further. We look at each other for a long time in awkward silence then he said something odd, "Did you pee on yourself?".

I looked down and noticed that the covers around my crotch were stained but it wasn't pee. I finally feel that the band on my cock is gone and that my mourning erection was actually leaking pre for the first time in years. I cried out at the feeling in my loins, "It's okay after what's happened to you. We'll just have to change the sheets." the mouse said. He lifted the covers and saw my erection leaking pre-cum like a fountain, my cock was swollen where the band had been, adding a dark red to my pinkish cock.

The mouse looks at me smiling darkly and says, "Lets talk later because... you see... I haven't eaten breakfast yet" he said eyes wide and innocent. I was in a state of total confusion when he said "First the creamy white milk". Then he took the head of my cock in his mouth and started suckling and licking. the stimulation is to much and in mere second i am filling his mouth with my cum, years of pent up aggression rocketing out of my swollen nuts.

The orgasm was indescribable, I nearly blacked out from it, sending my world turning like a punch from a boxer wearing brass knuckles. "Mmh" he moaned taking my cock out of his mouth for a second, "Whole milk my favorite type" he said before resuming to torture my penis. The head of my cock was now sensitive, but that didn't stop the mouse's sucking, It seems more like he picked up the pace assaulting my poor sore cock head.

It hadn't been touched by another in two years, but the mouse didn't seem to give a damn,as he calmly grabbed both of my bloated balls firmly in his hands, and massaged them in tight circles.When I actually heard the sloshing in my pent up nuts. I came hard, sending my seed blasting into his tight little mouth. His cheeks bulged out obscenely. but he didn't let one drop past his lips and out his hungry mouth. He suddenly pulled of my cock , "Now time for this big, ripe, sausage" he said, and downed my cock in one gulp.

The words "Big" and "Ripe" had never been used to describe my cock before, but he said it with so much conviction and sexiness that it felt like my cock grew an inch, while it was inside that mouse's hot mouth. My senses were going wild I never wanted the mouse to stop. The little vacuum nipped at my cock with his front teeth bringing pain and pleasure at the same time. I moaned at every nip and as soon as the mouse noticed he started gnawing my cock like a chew toy.

"Awwww!!" I screamed as my balls fire all their worth into that warm mouth and down it's gullet. After that the mouse finally backed off, his stomach slight bulge to it and his face had a satisfied look on it. My body was covered in sweat and my cock lied on top of my balls in absolute defeat not even twitching. "My name is Pied Piper.... and you're?" he asked reaching out his hand. "Elvis Teach, but shouldn't we have exchanged names before you gave me a blowjob?" i said while taking his hand and shaking it.

"Probably but I doubt you're cock and balls would've been happy with that arrangement" Pied said while giving my cock a flick, causing it to twitch with life for a second. "Hmm... But where am I?" I asked after a moment. You're in my house, but I suspect you want more details than that" Pied said while giggling, it was a strange sound when coupled with his jazz like voice. Strangely it is the one sound I have actually liked hearing in years. "But first you have a choice to make " he said, suddenly serious. I just looked the confusing mouse trying to figure out his games.

"One: you can go back to whatever your life you had before your enslavement. I promise to help you with any monetary issues you may have. You will be fully clothed and given a blank check as soon as you are well..." He said staring me in the eye. "... or you can become my pet" he said reaching into his back pocket and pulling out a collar. "Pet?" I asked slightly scared of this little mouse.

"Yes, pet... not slave, ...although you will call me master. You will be fully provided for, all your needs will taken care of by the staff, your only concern in the world will be me. I won't cause you much pain, and I will always give you pleasure" Pied replied, bending down and licking my cock, simultaneously grabbing my balls firmly and squeezing gently. The slow pain in my balls coupling with the sharp pleasure of his tongue on my abused cock was almost enough to make me shoot all over his questing tongue.

"Choose but know if you pick one the other is instantly nullified" Pied said fully serious, but still licking my sore cock. "Aren't you kinda strong arming me here" I said moaningly, trying to hold my own for once this morning and not climax so easily. "Maybe, but if you say no, I don't get to taste this tantalizing cock anymore" Pied said jokingly. "Now choose" he said, nipping my cock with his over-sized front teeth.

But I don't even know where I am or what this even is!" i yelled at him through clenched teeth, my eyes watering from the pain in my balls. Pied stopped licking my cock and dropped my balls, walked over to the couch, sat down, and waited until my breathing slowed to talk. "That's the point! If you stay with me, I will try to undo all of the damage your former masters did to you. You are broken, and while you could go out into the world and try to pick up the pieces of you former self, I don't believe you can do it alone. What I am offering is a new start and a way to make you whole again by letting someone else take care of you." he stated with a grin

"Now choose" he said, and stared at me with those blue unblinking eyes of his. I actually started crying. I was torn in half by emotions that had stayed bottled up for way too long, No one had ever offered to help me with anything in my entire life, and here a complete stranger offered me a way out from my disastrous life and into a new one. I looked at Pied and said "I am broken... weak...and my tantalizing cock is only five inches. Are you sure you want me as your pet?" I asked with tears in my eyes, each word more difficult than the last.

Pied stood and walked over to my bedside with purpose, bent down and me in tight hug, and then kisses me on my lips. His lips are soft as silk as they briefly grasp mine. He pulls back and says "Yes" leaving no room for doubt. I knew then what choice to make "I am your pet!!" I screamed as I licked his face with my tongue, to exhausted to force my way into his lips. My master new what i wanted and kissed me hard on the lips, his tongue over powering mine and forcing it to submit. i lied there loving every minute of it but the mood was short-lived when my stomach started to growl like a bitch in heat.

"Looks like someone's hungry!.... Care if i return the favor" he said, patting my stomach, unzipping his jeans and letting loose a cock that was downright monstrous. It was at least eleven inches long and two inches thick, red as crimson, with golf-ball sized nuts covered in white fur. He placed the head right on my lips, "Time for breakfast" He said as he squeezed his cock and let a massive drop of pre-cum hit my lips. Then he smeared it in with the head of his cock like lipstick.

I took the head between my lips and started to suckle like a newborn babe, I couldn't do much besides suckle, because I was just to weak. That didn't stop me from making my master moan and surrender more of his pre to me. He moaned when i nipped him with my fangs on accident, giving an idea, taking my lips from his cock, "Master you forgot something when you were eating breakfast" I said

"What?" he asked. "The big, shiny, white eggs!" I exclaimed, jumping up and taking his balls in his mouth, doing things to them that no chicken would've approved of. I licked, sucked, and gnawed on them with all the energy I had left in me. He must have not had a release in a while because when he pulled back, he blasted my face white . I simply lied back, savoring the feeling of my master showering me with his happiness, baptizing me as his new pet, and taking his rightful place place as alpha over his big kitty.

When he started to merely dribble on my face, I opened my eyes and started to lick my face but he stopped me, "Lets share" Master said. He licked my face, collect all of his white hot love in his mouth, when he was done, he kissed me and I slowly suckled the cum out of his mouth. I loved every minute of it, as it made its way to my stomach, calming it instantly. He reached into his pocket and grabbed the collar, placing it around my neck but not clipping it just yet, "No turning back" He said, before clipping my collar into place. He then crawled into the bed with me and hugged me possessively , as we both started to fall asleep. "Why would I want to... Master" I said finally content as I dreamed of tomorrow.

Broken Chapter 2: The Cum-Cat in the Festering Lands

I am a person that believes the only way to get better at something is to practice. So using this logic, If I want _Broken _to be a better story, then I have to write more chapters for it. As always I love critiques so please feel free to comment...

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