#11 of Spirit Lord Chronicles...
So, I can't take it anymore. This chap is JUST that bad!!! I'm taking it down, and have already started rewriting it. Sorry to my fans for sub-par postings! Fie and shame on me!
"It's time for me to know," Angel was saying, almost serenely lying in his hospital bed, watching the eldest Montague son. The twenty-three year old absently rubbed his left shoulder. He only had one arm. His left was lost, and ended as a stump about...
He Who Would Be Master: Chapter 10 "Othello!" Angel tried to move, but doing so scratched every bone in splintering agony. He tried anyways, and managed to prop himself up on his hands. "Othello... Where..." He looked around and saw only blurry...
**He Who Would be Master: Chapter 9** More time passed and Kaard was growing restless. He was growing cramped, and sore and stressed out almost to the point of claustrophobia. He spent his time working with the paper. He tried moving them about with...