Ordering the Atlas

Story by comidacomida on SoFurry

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Originally posted back in 2008 on FA in response to a journal I had up regarding different kinks, this story is all about involving a LOT of adult material. I will say that this story is, by far and away the MOST smut-like story I have done to date. It includes vulgarity, inflation by ejaculation, and (as I make fun of in the story itself) a porn-like plot.

Unlike most of my other stories there is no real in depth plot as the sole purpose of this story is to appeal to one or more kinks. The plot summary is as listed below:

"Enjoy!"


Ordering The Atlas Copyright 2008 comidacomida

Zack had seen a lot of stuff on the internet over the course of his lifetime. The hare considered himself one of the more jaded frequenters of internet porn sites. In his nineteen years he'd spent almost as many of them typing as talking. Out of anyone in his family, Zack was one of the most technologically minded and he'd come to think of the computer as his gateway to everything. When he discovered porn sites, it opened all new worlds.

Ever since he started thinking with his groin instead of his brains, Zack used the internet for his weekly-- daily-- hourly fix of smut. He was such a veteran of the online porn sites, in fact, that he fancied himself a connoisseur. It wasn't that he went around advertising his incredible knowledge of online erotica, nor did he brag about his extensive bookmark list of all of the best of the best online porn. The simple fact of the matter was that Zack probably had more experience with one-paw net surfing than any other nineteen year old alive. Nothing, however, in all those years prepared the teen for the new site he found one evening.

Working in phone tech support, Zack wasn't exactly a rich rabbit, but he did do a lot better than most of his old high school buddies who were either working fast food jobs or slaving away at college. He had enough money to get himself a modest apartment and still have some leftover to blow on worthless junk at the end of the month. Being a rabbit, he tended to be a homebody-- a stereotypical trait he never bothered trying to overcome. Unlike most of his brethren, however Zack didn't get the opportunities for a roll in the hay very often. He had a fling now and again, but he hadn't really had a steady relationship in over a year-- yet another reason he could blow his money on just about anything.

While Zack had always enjoyed porn sites, he also had a fondness for online shopping. The two preferences occasionally intersected, such as when the hare found a particularly rare porn flick, or when someone on a smut site referenced a good online store for a particular type of lube. On that fateful night, however, Zack stumbled across an entirely new site with an entirely new attraction. Zack was completely blown away... after all, his area of expertise was never supposed to surprise him. With curiosity getting the better of him, the rabbit clicked.

He wasn't the least bit surprised as his pop-up blocker went into overtime nullifying the near limitless amount of spam sites trying to get his attention but, when the real site loaded, he was immediately entranced. Zack had seen his share of sex toys, but the site that held him so raptly specialized in the truly high quality merchandise. His paw went straight to the mouse, browsing through the selection as fast as the scroll bar would let him, each picture looking more enticing than the last. What he was looking for was at the very bottom of the page, included in its own subheading; Zack had a thing for dildos.

Throughout high school Zack had experimented... sometimes with schoolmates and sometimes alone. As far as he could determine he was happy enough rutting with anything breathing, but sometimes he wasn't that picky. Male, female, biological, inorganic--Zack was a rabbit, and he lived up to his species' sex drive; the target of his lust didn't matter as much as its ability to satiate it.

About two years ago, Zack began to appreciate the joy of a prostate stimulated orgasm or, as he liked to put it, a good butt-fuck. It was just before high school prom when he had the chance to really go overboard and couple up with a fox and his sister. The two didn't really seem to mind sharing him, and, ever since, he was hooked on the though of blowing his load with something filling him from behind.

Eyes glossed over with gleeful lust, Zack scrolled further and further down the dildo selection. While he had three to call his own, the rabbit never could get enough variety, and he continued looking through the selection. He was pleasantly surprised at the complexity and variety of the selection, and had almost settled on purchasing a hippo when a flashing button caught his attention.

Each of the listed dildos had a button beneath a picture as well as a price listed beneath... but the flashing button took up an entire listing without offering a picture. The lack of a picture stoked Zack's curiosity, and the description on the button, unlike the others which listed the species, had only one word: "Atlas".

"Well... it's worth checking out." Zack noted to himself, and clicked. He watched as the screen began to load. His curiosity turned quickly to disdain as the computer continued to load. The distain turned to surprise as the screen finally loaded, merely displaying a "Thank you for your order." the rabbit would have said a few choice words but his computing was interrupted by a loud knock at the door. Issuing out a yelp, Zack slipped out of his chair as he reached quickly for a pair of boxers.

The knock came from the door again. "Hold on! I'm coming!" the rabbit shouted from his place on the floor, standing back up as he slid one foot into the black boxers, hopping twice on it as he moved nearer to the door with each 'step'. He cursed as he caught his tail in the front opening, having put them on backwards, but he quickly did a stuff-and tuck with it, followed by the same around front to avoid his stiff flesh peek out from the tail opening. Taking a moment to compose himself, the rabbit brushed some gray carpet lint from his white fur. Zack cracked the door open and peered out; he was surprised at what he saw.

A box with a large red stamp reading ATLAS was held about head height, blocking the rest of rabbit's view. Although tall for a rabbit, Zack still stood only slightly larger than five foot. Peering further and further up, Zack looked past the box and higher, gazing up at a large, dark-brown horse head looking right back down at him.

The delivery stallion must have been nearly seven foot tall, and stood like a giant next to the rabbit. Zack felt one of his ears flop downward while the other stood up at rapt attention, and he felt a shot of warmth spread through both of his ears as he blushed, seeing his own small reflection in the horse's eyes.

"Uh... shower." noted Zack, grinning sheepishly.

"Weren'yeh expectin' ah package?" the horse questioned matter-of-factly, a distinct Scottish accent to his voice.

"Well... not exactly... but... I guess so?" the rabbit offered with a shrug.

"Yeh ordered Th' Atlas, right?" the stallion asked, patting the side of the box with one huge hand. Zack noticed that, unlike the rest of the stallion's dark brown fur, his hands, and the long fur of his forearm was just as white as his own.

"I... don't know." Zack answered honestly, "I was checking out a website and I clicked on an advertisement--"

"Then yeh ordered Yh' Atlas." noted the delivery stallion, ducking down as he moved into the apartment, causing Zack to shuffle out of the way to avoid being run over. The horse marched into the center of the apartment as Zack slowly closed the door, about-facing slowly as he chided himself for comparing the strange situation to something he might have seen in a porn flick. The stallion took a seat on the sofa, box in his lap, and it was all the rabbit could do to not break out into laughter.

"Definitely porn storyline material." he snickered silently. He stopped mid thought as he realized that the stallion was in near-perfect view of his computer, and the small living room of his apartment didn't leave much space for privacy. With the speed only a rabbit could muster, Zack interposed himself between the horse and the computer.

"Well?" asked the stallion, "Where yeh want it, boy?" the question went by without much of a comment from Zack, who just waved a paw off to one of the coffee tables.

"Anywhere is fine... I just need to finish this email real fast." the expert lie was a practiced one, used many times when his mother or father walked into his room at an inopportune moment back when he had lived at home. He turned his back to the horse, quickly leaning over the keyboard to turn off the monitor--- but he paused when he saw that the screen had changed.

He read silently to himself, "Thank you for ordering The Atlas. You should have already received the delivery. Please be advised that all orders are final. The Atlas is on a rental basis and your credit card will start a running charge...." as Zack finished reading the line, the screen changed again, displaying only, "Now."

"Hold on a minute..." Zack denoted, ears raising again as felt indignant, and displeasure grabbed hold of him, "I was tricked into buying a--" he turned around, ready to confront the delivery stallion, but saw that the draft horse was no longer seated, rather, he stood in front of the sofa. The box was resting on the end table and, atop it, was the stallion's delivery clothes. The horse was built solidly and, as far as a delivery man, his muscles certainly lent to the impression. The stallion's fur grew darker along his stomach until it hit the belly button, at which point it became a lighter brown, sliding down to his--

Zack couldn't help but stare. The stallion's sheath looked like it could easily swallow his fist, and the sac hanging from it looked like a tight, furred shopping bag holding two cantaloupes. The draft horse stood casually with both of his white hands on his hips. "Ah'm Atlas." he offered matter-of-factly.

"...horse?" Zack finished his earlier statement, but his mind was so abruptly filled with the sight of the naked horse he forgot what comments he had made before the delayed noun. The rabbit slowly turned back around to the computer, stunned at the events of the evening. The screen had changed again, showing a running total... a balance of sorts listed in dollars. Zack realized that it would be the fee he was expected to pay... and he saw another button at the bottom.

"Transaction complete?" he read the button aloud, paw moving to the mouse. A large, powerful, white-furred hand reached out and grabbed Zack's wrist, slowly pulling it back from the button. A broad, sculpted abdomen ease up against the back of his head and he felt the horse's two furred orbs press between his shoulder blades as Atlas' other hand clasped him on the shoulder.

"Come on, boy... Ah saw yeh checkin it out... don't tell me yeh plan on endin' th'night earleh?" Atlas' hand slowly let go of Zack's wrist, sliding up his arm instead, and past his head to gently take hold of one of the rabbit's ears. Caught between a huge thumb and first finger, the rabbit's ear tingled as the horse began to roll it between the two digits. Zack didn't manage to come up with a reply, and didn't resist as the draft horse eased him away from the computer. "There yeh go, lad..." Atlas chuckled, "Come on over here." the large horse crooned, his deep voice as smooth as whipped chocolate and as provocative as... well... Zack couldn't think of a comparison.

The horse set Zack on the armrest of the sofa, "Now, bunneh... tell Atlas why yeh called, hmm?" the horse continued stroking his ear, making it hard for Zack to concentrate as the stallion expertly manipulated such a sensitive part of his rabbit anatomy. To make matters more distracting, he felt his cock press up indignantly against his boxers, pointing out that it still hadn't been tended to since being interrupted at the computer.

"Um... I was... curious." Zack stammered, eyes rising up to glimpse at Atlas' face, trying valliantly to avoid staring at the horse's endowments.

"Well... go ahead then." the draft horse chuckled, reaching his other hand up to start caressing Zack's other ear. A little chill of pleasure caused the rabbit to shiver for just a moment at Atlas' second touch. Slowly losing any sense of false decency, Zack lowered his eyes down to the horse's groin, taking in the enormous sight once again, looking at the brown fur and the folds of black flesh that made up Atlas' sheath. He tentatively reached a paw out, encircling as much of one orb as he could with his fingers. It was warm, as would be expected. It was also firm and, as Zack gave it an experimental heft, weighty.

"Not bad, eh? Size runs in th' fam'ly." Atlas added.

"Wow..." was all Zack could muster. The horse just chuckled.

Zack reached out with his other paw and took hold of the second portion of Atlas' black sac. He rolled his hands against the large orbs and the stallion widened his stance, permitting the rabbit more room to inspect. Zack's eyes widened as he saw a broad wall of pink flesh peek at the tip of the horse's sheath, and he slowly drew one hand away from Atlas' sac to press it against the sheath.

The rabbit gripped it gently, feeling the large girth of the firming member within. Stroking the smooth sheath several times, Zack managed to get more of the horse's shaft to appear. Moving his paw then to the exposed flesh, Zack was pleased to feel Atlas' grip tighten around his ears.

The rabbit began to caress the horse's firming shaft, stroking it with his paw as more and more of the equine's length slid free of its resting place. Atlas' stallionhood was not actually pink as Zack had first assumed, rather, only the upper-most tip of it was; the rest of the horse's shaft was almost pure black in color. Looking up at Atlas, Zack saw the large stallion gazing back down at him. Smiling, Zack leaned forward and pressed his muzzle right against the head of the horse's firming flesh and began nibbling and suckling at it.

"Woah... hold on there, lad." the horse noted, drawing Zack's head away from his groin with firm pressure on his ears.

"Did I-- what?" Zack asked, taken aback by the horse's sudden reluctance to his advances.

"I ain't a whore." Atlas noted simply.

"I-- but... how... with--" Zack sputtered, completely at a loss for the sudden change of attitude from the horse.

Atlas calmly let go of one of Zack's ears and moved it over to his other wrist where he still wore a watch. Atlas pressed a button *Beep* and gripped Zack's second ear once again, "Now Ah'm on break." the horse grinned, "Whatever Ah do now is up ta me." he winked, and Zack was pulled off balance as the horse used both of his ears to pull the rabbit's face back into his crotch.

Zack felt his heartbeat increase as he nibbled at the horse's withdrawn sheath. Atlas' member continued growing, now beyond any size he could hope to fit in his mouth. More an arm than a cock, Atlas' shaft was enormous, and Zack appreciated it all the more. The rabbit slowly drew back, taking hold of one of Atlas' arms, and eased him around the armrest and onto the sofa. The stallion sat down, and the rabbit rolled off the arm rest and onto his leg, flopped across the horse's lap. Using both hands, Zack began to stroke the monstrous member, causing Atlas to ease his head back, eyes heavily lidded even as he continued to caress Zack's ears.

"Damn, lad... yeh got some skills." the stallion panted, and Zack watched as copious amounts of clear, slick fluid began to seep from Atlas' ample shaft. Coating his paws in it, the rabbit continued stroking the massive organ, slathering it in Atlas' own precum. With the deft movements only a rabbit could muster, Zack managed to loose his boxers, wiggling out of them as he let them slide off of his foot. Perched next to the erect horse, Zack began using his entire body to stroke Atlas's member.

"Oh god, bunneh..." Atlas gasped, "Maybe Ah need ta take two breaks."

Zack rose up again, his own shaft stroking along the length of Atlas'... but he didn't stop there. Standing, Zack straddled Atlas' cock, which came up past his knees. Resting a paw on either of Atlas' shoulders, Zack began to bend his legs feeling the equine's broad head slide up between his thighs and up into the cleft of his rump. His fluffed tail flicked once when it felt the touch of Atlas' member, and Zack forced it to relax, toes spreading as he felt a jet of precum spray out of the horse's shaft, coating him.

"Hey there, lad... careful." Atlas noted, eying him again as Zack perched atop the horse's enormous girth.

"Relax... I've done this before." the rabbit grinned.

"With a shire draft horse?" Atlas countered.

"No... a miniature pony... size is different but the concept is the same." the rabbit offered back.

A humored expression spread its way across Atlas' muzzle, "Well then... be mah guest."

Zack wriggled his toes underneath Atlas' rump, getting as much of a grip as he could, and began bending his knees, pressing the stallion's girth against the opening beneath his tail. After three tries, pausing from a mixture of pain and lack of success, Zack finally managed to open himself wide enough that the tip of Atlas' shaft spread him apart. Winching, Zack clenched his teeth, feeling his member stiffen into rock-hard attention. It had been at least two months since he last had someone inside him, and the german shepherd hadn't been nearly as large... not even close.

"Well... yeh doin' better'n most." the bemused horse noted. Zack realized after a moment's pause that, aside from the nonchalant comment, the horse was definitely excited by his attempt. Zach felt Atlas' heart beat pick up the moment his body surrendered an inch, and another hot spray of precum into the rabbit's opening convinced Zack that the stallion was eagerly seeing if he could go further; Zack knew he could.

Gripping the horse's hips with his feet again, the rabbit tensed his legs, using his ankles as he pulled himself down using the horse's weight for leverage. Gasping, Zack felt his insides shift as the entirety of the horse's head finally forced itself through his opening. He wheezed, several inches more of the horse flesh feeding into him as he slid down the thinner portion of Atlas' rod, the broad head barreling its way into his insides. Catching himself by planting his feet firmly on the sofa, Zack pressed his hands firmly against the horse's chest for support.

"God!" the stallion noted with vigor, "Yeh did!"

"Yea..." Zack gulped at air, holding himself steady as he let his body familiarize itself with the enormous shaft, "I took it."

"Half of it, anyway." the stallion added.

Zack's eyes rolled as he realized that Atlas was right... he was still a long way from resting his rump atop the horse's groin, but he had no doubt that he was nearing his limit. With several more breaths, Zack let his insides calm down, even as his rock hard, erection continued to remind him of how much he was getting a kick out of being impaled despite the discomfort.

"Seems yehr enjoin yehself too there, lad." Atlas noted, and started rubbing his ears again even as Zack fought to retain his balance atop the still bobbing horse flesh. The rabbit moaned softly, feeling the hard, mushroom-like head of the horse's cock continue to force his insides to accommodate it. Deep within him the rabbit felt his intestines still working their way around the equine meat, and it couldn't have turned him on more.

"I'm going to be hating myself in the morning..." he spoke to himself, and he slowly eased his hands off of Atlas' chest, curling his toes... and let gravity take hold of him. Zack curled his legs, and impaled himself the rest of the way. He saw red as pain lanced through him, and prayed nothing ruptured.

Beneath him, Atlas' body convulsed, and the horse shot his hips forward at the stimulation. Zack choked from the impact of the horse's shaft thrust up into him, and, as his head cleared, felt pain through his entire abdomen. The horse gripped him by either side of his face, "Boy-o? Lad? Hey... Laddy?"

"Did I bite you?" Zack wheezed.

"Nay, lad... mah fingers weren't near yeh muzzle." the horse responded.

"I meant your cock, when it shoved up into my mouth." the rabbit deadpanned with a groan.

Atlas grinned in response, and stroked the side of the rabbit's muzzle, "Yeh know, lad... Ah don't meet folk who can take all a me too often."

"All of you?" Zack asked incredulously, and looked down. Sure enough, the rabbit rested atop the horse's lap. His own lithe form was disrupted by the presence of the horse flesh within him, a clean outline visible almost all the way up to his sternum, "Holy hell."

"Yea... not a pretty sight, eh?" the horse questioned, shifting position to better support Zack.

The rabbit went rigid immediately as he felt his still-hard erection draw through Atlas' belly fur. He grabbed fist-fulls of chest fur as he gritted his teeth, wheezing "Oh god..." The stimulation on his member was too much as his whole body began to spasm. Zack writhed upon the horse's cock as his body convulsed with release. Rabbit seed sprayed across Atlas' abdomen and Zack could feel his insides ungulate against the intruding member. Beneath the rabbit, Atlas shivered. The horse's eyes rolled back into his head as he gasped and moaned.

Zack could feel the horse's already rock-hard member grow even firmer within him. The rabbit couldn't stop his own orgasm, and could only mew pitifully as it was drawn out and extended by his inability to ejaculate all at once with so much flesh imbedded into him. He whimpered softly as Atlas' vice-like grip took hold of his waist, and the stallion bayed out his own release.

The rabbit squirmed and gaped as he felt the stallion's member jump and convulse. Hot horse spunk bathed his insides and his already full body felt near to overflowing. He shuddered as, Atlas' next jet of seed forced more for his own out of his still throbbing member, spraying another blast of his own fluids onto the horse's sternum. Atlas pushed down harder as his hips quivered; the flood gates truly opened, and it was all Zack could do to remain where he was, the force threatening to launch the rabbit skyward even as Atlas fought to hold him against his groin.

The outline of Atlas' member within his abdomen long forgotten, Zack could only stare as his previously slim stomach distended. He quickly lost sight of his own still-heaving member when the horse flesh hose continued to spew more and more spunk into his gut. Zack's head spun as he saw his stomach grow at first into a paunch, and then into a full-blown beer-gut. Not stopping there, Atlas' eager shaft had yet more to offer him. A full minute later, Atlas' ejaculations finally subsided, leaving Zack bloated.

"I..." Zack gasped, and burped.

Atlas chuckled, and wiped a cum bubble from Zack's muzzle, "Yeh full, Ah'm thinkin, lad."

"Ugh... yea..." Zack answered, unable to move from his current position.

Atlas slowly eased his left side up, twisting just enough to ease Zack against the couch. The rabbit lay on his back while the horse slowly rotated until he was kneeling on the floor, member still inside the rabbit who was laying down on the sofa, "This'll prob'ly be a bit uncomfortable, lad..." Atlas noted and, with a slow, smooth, continuous motion, he drew his hips back, member emerging from Zack an inch at a time.

Zack burped again, holding his stomach as he felt his insides queasily move yet again, filling back in the space that had been taken up by the horse's flesh. Finally, with one last motion and a wet, resounding "ploop", Atlas' member escaped. Zack groaned, and the sofa and his thighs slicken immediately; a small cascade of fluid leaked out of his tail hole.

He smelled the scent of blood, but it was only faint, and it was greatly overpowered by the smell of the stallion's powerful, musky seed. The rabbit shivered again, and his hips thrust two times instinctively, and then a third, and two more jets of his own jism sprayed forth, free to escape, no longer inhibited by the horse flesh.

"Well... Ah gotta say Ah fiidn't know what ta expect when Ah first saw yeh, lad... but Ah'm impressed... and it takes a lot ta impress Th' Atlas." the horse chuckled, getting back into his delivery suit. He grabbed the box under his arm as he glanced back to Zack, "Tell yeh what, boy... looks like yehr done tanight... we'll call the tab good there an' yeh can always log on another night." Atlas grabbed his hat and made for the door.

Zack slowly stood, slightly clumsily as the contents of his stomach off balanced him by sloshing around. He stumbled to the computer, steadying himself with the chair as Atlas opened the door. With one smooth motion, Zack clicked once with the mouse.

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Outside, Atlas was just about to close the door when his beeper went off. Looking at it, he saw the same address as was written on the door... it was the rabbit. Glancing back inside, he realized that it must have been a computer bug since he'd just finished up. The horse moved into the entryway and glanced towards where he'd left the teen.

"Hey... Atlas..." The white hare was leaning against the sofa, seed dribbling out of his tail and down his leg. Much to Atlas' surprise, the rabbit stood with a very hard erection, "Rabbits recover pretty quick." and the bemused horse smirked as the rabbit held up a credit card, "You have another break coming up soon?"

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