Story Idea. Tell me what you think.
#1 of Miscellaneous
This post is just a kind of intro to the idea I've got for this story.
He trails the man closely in his black trench coat, sunglasses, and baseball cap. The man he follows is his target. The one he has been after his whole life; trained and honed his skills his whole life to kill. It was the man who killed his father. The man killed him as a child hid in the closet. The child ran out of the closet and clawed the man's face, injuring his left eye, blinding it and leaving a scar along his face. He struck the boy's head, knocking him out so cold he barely breathed. The man, in pain and short an eye, thought him dead and left. That boy was the man in the trench coat.
And he WOULD have revenge...
_ Hey guys, DonnE here. This is an idea I had for a story. I'll write it regardless, but I thought I'd ask for feedback. Please forgive the typos I'm sure are there: I typed this with one hand on a tablet. _
_ Feedback of any kind is appreciated so long as it's not blatant asshole-ish-ness for the sake if being a trollish dick. _
_ For those of you who read my other story, I AM planning out the next chapter. I'm sorry I poofed, but rl and such come first... _
_ PS If you are the praying type, please send one my grandfather's way. He's in a bad way. Thanks for putting up with my MIA-ness. _
_ -DonnE _