Commission for thestarwarrior

Story by Misty Maiko on SoFurry

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Before getting into the story, a few things should be noted:

-This -is- a commission for a webcomic of the commissioner(ee?)

-A small bit of the first few paragraphs were changed by the commissioner(ee?) so it could better flow with his other pieces

-If you read into the story, you'll find out that June and Hunter is the same person. Hunter is her nickname.

... I think that covers it all.


It had sure been a long night. June, the brown and black raccoon had just confessed her love to Gomoo, a white-mouse-like-hybrid, at the school dance. After words the moment truly got passionate as the had their first kiss. The kiss was more out of frustration from June after trying to coach his feeling for her out into the open for almost a week but It slowly grew more and more passionate as the new couple started to lose their selves in the kiss. After their kiss they suddenly realize just how late it was getting. They had to get home before the best night of their lives was ruined by their parents griping at them about coming in so late. That night June was in her bed, thinking about the night she had just shared with her new boyfriend. She really did love Gomoo, and was so happy that they were together now. The memory of the kiss was still ringing in her mind. June couldn't wait to go to Gomoo's house the next day, or to see him at school again after the weekend. Finally, Hunter sat up on the edge of her bed, and looked at the clock. Nearly midnight. She frowned, and decided that there was only one thing to do. She opened up the window in her room, went to her bathroom to grab a ziploc bag, and then made her way out. She looked around the night sky as she made her way to Gomoo's place. She knew where he lived from previous, and unfortunately mostly unromantic, times. The sky was young and beautiful, just like their love. She imagined herself as a shooting star, making her way to the galaxy that would be her love. The air was cool, and she shivered a bit as she walked through the night. Finally, she arrived at Gomoo's place. She climbed up to the window, and tried opening it. It wasn't locked in place, surprisingly. Suddenly, thoughts worried her. She was breaking and entering into a building that wasn't hers, to see a fur that she hoped was as in love with her as she was with him. There was nothing to do now but find out. She entered the room, and silently closed the window. June silently padded over to where he was sleeping. He looked so innocent, and so sweet. Suddenly, her mind was filled with more passionate ideas. Her boyfriend was really hot, and that meant that he owed something to her tonight. She took off the blanket that was covering him, and saw he was only wearing his boxers. She was pretty turned on. She looked over his relatively-toned, mouse-like body, eagerly, and decided to take off her clothes. June then continued on to take off Gomoo's underwear, exposing his un-erect cock. She decided she would fix that. As Gomoo awoke, he felt something swirl around his cock. "uhnn," he said, waking up. As he looked down, he jerked back a bit, noticing that June's mouth was around him. "Wha-what are you doing in my room?" he asked. "What does it look like, lover boy?" she asked back. "But mom and dad might..." His voice trailed off as he tilted his head back. She had him, and there was nothing he could do about it. His cock was now massively erect in her mouth as she bobbed her head back and forth on it, swirling her tongue around as she did so. "June, you feel so good..." He said. She only grinned back at him. "Aren't you going to stop and let me take you?" he asked her. She slipped her head off for a brief moment to reply, "Oh, I'll let you. After I get my treat." She went back to sucking him, and gave his tip little licks with her tongue. Her paw groped the base of his shaft, and they both knew he didn't have much longer. It was only a short while before globs of his seed spilled out, filling her mouth. Gomoo panted, and looked down unhappily as his cock shrank back to its usual size. June only smiled, her mouth now off of him, and started rubbing his penis, gently at first, then furiously. As her paw stroked it hard and fast, her bushy tail teasingly brushing against it. It didn't take long before he was erect again. June, being the more dominant one, then climbed on top of him as he sat up. She slowly brought her sex down on him, in the cowgirl position, facing him, smiling. She let out a moan, and their eyes widened in fear. She cupped her mouth with her paw as they lay motionless. After a few moments of not hearing anything, it was safe to assume that Gomoo's parents were still asleep. To fix the problem, June slipped her tongue into Gomoo's mouth. It wasn't much, but anything to muffle her moans was a blessing. She then brought herself down hard and fast on him, crying out in pleasure. She wasn't a virgin, but anyone hearing her wouldn't have known otherwise. She brought herself up and down, sliding her sex along his shaft. She moaned into his mouth as he groped her breasts with his paws. He eagerly squeezed them as his tongue slid against hers in his mouth. She started raising and lowering herself faster and faster, her moans becoming louder, his mouth now barely muffling them. Her breasts jiggled in his paws as he ran his thumbs over each nipple before tweaking one, still groping the other. Their faces showed nothing but pure lust. As his cock throbbed in her, he bucked his hips the best he could given his position. They were both close. Suddenly, Gomoo broke the kiss. "What about protection?" he asked. He hadn't thought about it before hand. Hunter pointed to a ziplock bag that had fallen out of her pant pocket, with pills, that she had grabbed earlier. They were presumably morning-after pills. "I love you," he said. "I know," June replied. She shoved her tongue back into his mouth, and started sliding herself up and down his erect penis as fast as she could, moaning loudly into his mouth. Apparently his parents were heavy sleepers, because at this point, his mouth was barely muting her moans. He groaned back into hers, and she, after breaking the kiss, fell backwards purposefully, pulling him on top of her as she did so. "Finish us!" June exclaimed in an excited whisper. Gomoo nodded, and began thrusting hard and fast into her. Her moans were getting, although barely possible, even louder, as he made his final thrusts. Her breasts jiggled widly as he brought he cock as far back as he could, before shoving it back into her, over and over again, rapidly. Finally, she came. "I'm cumming!" she exclaimed. They were both more than surprised this didn't wake anyone as he said, "Me too!" Sure enough, his throbbing cock released spurts of his seed all over in her, some of it spilling out. He pulled out, and they both panted. He laid back, and she snuggled next to him. Their scents were infused in each other, and they were more than happy about it. "How long are you going to stay here?" he inquired. Her response was nothing short of magical for both of them. "I'll stay by your side for as long as you need me," she said. "Don't worry; I'll be gone by morning. Just try to get some sleep my lover boy." He nodded and drifted off to the best sleep he had ever gotten.

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