Goodbye 10 pages, I won't miss you.

Story by Dijo on SoFurry

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So I was working on chapter 4 and progress was going quite well however the more I wrote the more I did not care for what I was writing. The title of this kinda gives it away but I scrapped 10 pages and decided to re-wright from a point I was content with. Though it sucked scrapping the work I had done it also feels good. It took me some time to come to this decision but I'm happy with it and I feel much better with the direction I have chosen now over the path I previously took.

Chapter 3: The Journey Begins: The Morning After

Luna stretched out a bit yawning softly as she opened her eyes, the room was dimly lit with a soft glow. The sun had just begun to peak over the horizon dawning a new day. Picking her head up a little Luna stretched herself out with a moan of...

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Chapter 3: The Journey Begins: Ponyville Part 3

"Say it!" Luna begged shaking Cielo a little trying to get a response from the dark grey stallion. "Why won't you say it!?" Cielo drew in a deep breath and shook his head a little. "If you want me to, promise me Princess Luna. You have to promise to...

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Chapter 3: The Journey Begins: Ponyville Part 2

Luna and Cielo made it back to town in good time and Luna was able to find her footing once more about half way back. Upon reaching town the two made their way to the town hall for Luna to give her speech, waiting for them was an agitated...

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