Lost Cause Ch. 2
I forgot to say in the first chapter but if you wouldn't mind please post your comments and criticism thank you
Sitting in the plymouth breeze i was relaxing, waiting for my brother to hurry up and get in the car so we could leave. my ears twitched as i heard the front door slam shut. starting the car i put my seat belt on and put it in reverse. as soon as he got in the car and closed the door i backed out slowly keeping my eye on the line of pine trees. "so where do you need to go wils?" i asked as i put the car in drive. "i need to go to Calys house and pick some stuff up".
Sighing i looked at the ice lathered roads and and was glad i had studed tires on the car this time. pulling into the far lane i picked up speed till we got to 45mph. "he lives on jane street right?" i asked. i needed to stop at a store and pick up some cheese milk and eggs. " yea" wils said as he turned up the radio as the song sounds of madness came on. slowing to 35mph as we came to the small town i flipped my blinker on when we neared the parking lot for M&M market.
parking i got out and shut the door as my brothers complaints started to become vocal. putting the keys in my pocket i walked in the store and laid my ears back at the annoying ting sound. smiling at the cashier i walked down till i got to the frigerated section. looking at the milk i sighed. "what kind did he like again.... two percent i guess" picking up a two percent gallon lucerne of milk i side stepped and looked at the cheese.grabbing a block of sharp chedder cheese i looked to my left and saw eggs. just grabbing a box i headed to the checkout.
"Your total is $8.74" thanking the cashier i grabed my bag of food and went back out to the car. opening the driver side door i dropped the food in the back seat and started the car."what did you have to get in there" wils asked in an irratated tone. "what i buy and what i dont buy is my business wils not yours. now be happy i let you ride in my car smelling like you do" he had overdosed on the axe spray and i felt like i was being smothered in toxic fumes.
Cracking the window i breathed in the cold air and pulled out of the parking lot. leaving the small town behind i continued till we came to Silk Street. turning i drove for another half mile before Jane Street was in sight. pulling down the street i counted off the driveways till we came to number five on the right. "there now shoo and call mom for a ride im going to be busy for the rest of the day." i told Wils. "alright alright senri" he said as he slamed the car door. turning around i pulled back onto the road and continued down silk street. i sure hoped Arlen liked scrambled eggs.